Tutor Doctor is an in-home tutoring company. We are a franchise company so from time to time franchise brokers bring us new candidates to buy a franchise. If we approve these people to become Tutor Doctor franchisees we send an announcement out to the broker group and congratulate them on presenting us with a great candidate.
Tell us a bit about who you are and the people you reach
Professional franchise brokers - this is a Business to Business communication.
In the attached document you'll see that there is a lot of focus around the education element. I think we should have a bit more professional look to this.
The objective of this announcement is to create excitement about Tutor Doctor for the various brokers receiving this communication in the hopes that they will send us more quality candidates.
We will send this to them in a pdf form (but I guess we will need the psd files to update the different templates).
Attached you will find an example of our existing announcement - very weak as far as I'm concerned.
You can get a higher res image of the tutor doctor logo by using google images search (search "tutor doctor logo"). The logo is green and purple (as opposed to a green and blue version you may find).