This is for a baby onsie, something cute, easy to see, eye catching
The Great South Bay is an area of New York that has fishing, surfing, beaches, boats--it might be fun to include these.
UPDATE for finalists see new pics added:
for the word baby--instead of it being crossed out I like the idea of it being written "bayby"--with the "y" being a different color (see pic). I'm also open to a creative use of imagery to make it obvious that we are playing on the words bay and baby.